Haiku Sonnet: Walking to Work

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In a store window
I’m a form drifting amid
traffic, not—as in

photographs—younger,
but older, my future ghost.
I look for angles,

anticipating
my face averting its eyes
or steering itself

into a place where
the world flattens to one pane
and the soul swims

in its layer, transparent,
now finished with time.

2 Responses

  1. [...] can’t decide whether to write a haiku sonnet or a non-fiction novel. Maybe I’ll write my own [...]

    A funny post. If I could do any of the things you mention, I’d certainly not be writing haiku sonnets! —D

  2. Read my post and comments on Beautiful People today if you get a chance. I know you are busy, but it connects to this lovely Haiku.

    I see the connection. I love the description in TJ Maxx. It’s not so much fun to get older, but you’re right that we are what we are…when we are. —D

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